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C3 As an edit, there are black flashes in between some of the edits which will cost you significant marks. Loose the second shot. What has woken him, what sound would tell us something about the characters dreams or why he can't sleep? You need to look at how you have cut the scene from the door to the desk as this is clunky. Why is the rag significant that he is rubbing it first and why draw attention to this? Cut down all the walking around parts and just get to the main points of action. But there are jump cuts as he is getting ready that must be looked at carefully as this is jump cutting 3 times.
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ReplyDeleteAs an edit, there are black flashes in between some of the edits which will cost you significant marks.
Loose the second shot. What has woken him, what sound would tell us something about the characters dreams or why he can't sleep?
You need to look at how you have cut the scene from the door to the desk as this is clunky.
Why is the rag significant that he is rubbing it first and why draw attention to this?
Cut down all the walking around parts and just get to the main points of action. But there are jump cuts as he is getting ready that must be looked at carefully as this is jump cutting 3 times.