Edit Of Our First Shoot (need to re-film footage)

This is my edit of our raw footage for our thriller opening. I have cut the shots together and colour graded it. This task will determine who is the strongest person in our group with using Final Cut - We have decided to re-film the sequence as the shots are not up to the standards we desire, we will be filming on the 02/02/13 in order to get better footage.
Things we will add in the final version:
Foley
Soundtrack
Titles